tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6763578809000446345.post96264933339016106..comments2015-02-08T11:31:14.697-08:00Comments on every branch bears words: #10la fillehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02074199795612030053noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6763578809000446345.post-50011415842288720612011-07-29T20:50:46.299-07:002011-07-29T20:50:46.299-07:00I loved all this imagry. BEAUTIFUL!
I particularly...I loved all this imagry. BEAUTIFUL!<br />I particularly liked "the sun yawning whisps of<br />foamy clouds across the infant sky"cosmos camihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09558327124451076957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6763578809000446345.post-80110943345495334562011-07-27T12:10:13.961-07:002011-07-27T12:10:13.961-07:00The last line is beautiful!The last line is beautiful!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6763578809000446345.post-4779470768996438602011-07-27T09:18:19.411-07:002011-07-27T09:18:19.411-07:00Thank you! <3 I love it too :)Thank you! <3 I love it too :)la fillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02074199795612030053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6763578809000446345.post-77785235399183724842011-07-27T04:24:03.441-07:002011-07-27T04:24:03.441-07:00lovely descriptions, you put us there and let us f...lovely descriptions, you put us there and let us feel the moment...like a stone in our hands we roll it over...really enjoyed this as i love nature...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6763578809000446345.post-80864497445235218322011-07-26T23:32:23.946-07:002011-07-26T23:32:23.946-07:00I like fierce lovers/abstract artists. neatI like fierce lovers/abstract artists. neatAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6763578809000446345.post-6023166272814468342011-07-26T01:10:01.751-07:002011-07-26T01:10:01.751-07:00Nice poem, love this "who on quiet days, gent...Nice poem, love this "who on quiet days, gently kiss their masterpieces"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6763578809000446345.post-71986076203641902512011-07-25T18:51:31.238-07:002011-07-25T18:51:31.238-07:00mind blowing, the way your word speak and sing is ...mind blowing, the way your word speak and sing is poetic and impressive.<br /><br />cheers,<br />welcome to Jingle Poetry.<br />Happy Potluck.Bluebell Books Twitter Clubhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02346482636849975765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6763578809000446345.post-66258660528908758912011-07-25T11:33:29.081-07:002011-07-25T11:33:29.081-07:00I like the tender build in your first two stanzas,...I like the tender build in your first two stanzas, yet you blew me away as does the wind in these last two:<br />who stand solitary, their slender bodies<br />leaning back in rapture as they have done<br />since they were first ravaged by our winds -<br />fierce lovers, abstract artists<br /><br />who on quiet days, gently kiss their masterpieces<br />admire their tender quills like tiny hands<br />reaching out to catch the rain, to hold<br />the sun like a warm stone in emerald palms<br /><br />Very powerful imagery. Beuatiful paintings, the brush strokes of the wind leaving wonders.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6763578809000446345.post-48525156675557473622011-07-25T08:42:30.903-07:002011-07-25T08:42:30.903-07:00No, thank you for the kind words, all of you!No, thank you for the kind words, all of you!la fillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02074199795612030053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6763578809000446345.post-54089257252066413682011-07-25T08:34:29.374-07:002011-07-25T08:34:29.374-07:00who stand solitary, their slender bodies
leaning b...who stand solitary, their slender bodies<br />leaning back in rapture as they have done<br />since they were first ravaged by our winds -<br />fierce lovers, abstract artists<br /><br />I love this! I've always been fascinated by trees that are somehow pushed to extremes because of altitude or wind. Thank you for sharing this poem.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6763578809000446345.post-83020958970213301532011-07-25T08:32:06.910-07:002011-07-25T08:32:06.910-07:00Nice imagery on nature and loversNice imagery on nature and loversAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6763578809000446345.post-47980255250309607672011-07-25T08:23:23.856-07:002011-07-25T08:23:23.856-07:00Nice poem. It looks like the rock formation saved...Nice poem. It looks like the rock formation saved the trees from going all the way down. A great picture of nature's harmony.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com