tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6763578809000446345.post7758275290006315112..comments2015-02-08T11:31:14.697-08:00Comments on every branch bears words: #9la fillehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02074199795612030053noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6763578809000446345.post-86677898422063313842011-07-20T20:56:12.673-07:002011-07-20T20:56:12.673-07:00"rising along their spine like raindrops on a..."rising along their spine like raindrops on a skyscraper" - love that image (but not the feeling). Vivid and dark.Rachel Hoythttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12565668664072704971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6763578809000446345.post-49398269072802491752011-07-19T14:11:59.019-07:002011-07-19T14:11:59.019-07:00This is powerful, dark and real. This line "s...This is powerful, dark and real. This line "seeing the microscopic<br />details of disease and the macroscopic<br />of people" <br />reminded me of something I read paralleling humans and cancer. Shine on!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6763578809000446345.post-67833575306731255422011-07-19T12:38:39.498-07:002011-07-19T12:38:39.498-07:00My work opens all sorts of doors for me. And I'...My work opens all sorts of doors for me. And I'm happy I gave somebody goosebumps, thats an accomplishment I feel! Thanks everybody for the kind words <3la fillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02074199795612030053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6763578809000446345.post-60870861012415487732011-07-19T11:48:37.219-07:002011-07-19T11:48:37.219-07:00Doomed, yes, awakened, yes. You gave me goose bump...Doomed, yes, awakened, yes. You gave me goose bumps and I am reminded of my own future demise. However, most welcome that is, as it opens doorways to life as well. I hope your work does that too to you, even if you are much too often looking through that curtain.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07687396069629563143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6763578809000446345.post-49392966227253730162011-07-19T08:47:20.861-07:002011-07-19T08:47:20.861-07:00What a mesmerizing piece. It reads like a work of ...What a mesmerizing piece. It reads like a work of several hundred pages, condensed to these two stanzas. Every line has import and history behind it, giving (and hiding) life, as the veil within your poem. Thanks!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6763578809000446345.post-43285995910812539712011-07-19T05:37:51.980-07:002011-07-19T05:37:51.980-07:00Good one!!!Good one!!!Ramesh Soodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.com